CH 5 Part II….well most of it…

The Imp has decided to be my muse for this, rather than work his magic on a re-write himself. He says that he wants me to be the authoress of everything, but he ‘was more than happy to give his constructive criticism and fantastic creative genius for song alteration’. His words (almost) exactly. HA! Nightfahls muse has prodded mine into writing ‘Moonlit Paths’! (With a bonus poem born of pieces culled from the ’song’)

I’m still battling with Chapter 6, which is Nolemire’s account of the welcome feast and possibly the meeting with the Lord and Lady of The Golden Wood. There will be the introduction of 3 new elves (more brothers!) and perhaps more of Aure.  What is Galangal up to now? What were Mire and Aearions punishments? Do we care about Galangals? Stay tuned!

So…I’ve been sitting in the passenger seat of a truck for a week, mumbling and counting off syllables on my fingers ( looking positively mad I am sure) This is all that I have to show for it… I will do the cop out thing and preface it with:

 Found among Aearions belongings in the Guards Quarters was a worn and battered piece of parchement. Half of it appeared to be missing, and among the blotches of ink and apparent wine stains, Lord Glorfindel found the following verses scrawled across the tattered page:

Across the seas

I drift and sail

And dream of Elvin Maids

Their forms are fair

Their lips are soft

Their beauty never fades  

 

They walk with grace

And sylph-like charm

They tempt me with a glance

Their lips are soft

Their eyes are bright

Their hips sway in their dance 

 

 I’ll toast to them

With miruvor

Express my thoughts with rhyme

I’ll dance and sing

And drink fine wine

To while away the time   

 

I’ll wait for one

To call me forth

And claim me for her own

I’ll find myself

Within her arms

Be-spelled by dulcet tone 

 

 Come walk with me

My sweet fair maid

Beneath the velvet sky

Come dance with me

I’ll hold you close

Beneath the stars we’ll lie …

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